The Great Pandemonium

This is actually really good. I mean, it's not perfect, but it's quite close to it, I'll say! And by the way, you've absolutely got this. Practice makes perfect in this world we all live in, and with enough of it, dreams can very well be realized! As far as I can figure, there is nothing quite like a sky on fire, a setting sun, some mist in the background, and western-style elements. Just think about it: when next year rolls around and you've got some more experience under your belt, there's nowhere in the world to go but up. Keep on keeping on, my friend-- and great title, too.